The sun rises thick:
egg yolk spilt on brick.
The sky a blackened toast
so crisp

the buttery light won’t stick.

Just stay home, the air is sick.

It can’t get well enough to offer nourishment.
Makes us choke, snot-nosed repentance.

Beggars on our knees below unfiltered air vents.

Burning eyes and itchy skin,
but there’s no wind to forgive us;
no clear bronchi left.

We are nature’s servants.

© 2026 | K.F. Hartless


8 responses to “Commute High-Risk”

  1. Youch. Great commentary.

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    1. Thanks, worms. The air is villanous today. Truly toxic. I appreciate you stopping by!

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  2. 😥 sorry to hear that.

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    1. Thanks. It is very sad as so many people don’t have ac or any way to filter from the pollution.

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  3. It sounds worse than Los Angeles there, yikes!

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    1. The PM 2.5 has been over 175 today. It’s a total mind trip. Hope LA is not that as bad. Thanks for reaching out.

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  4. powerfully portrayed through imagery; how do people end up in a hell hole like this ??

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    1. Good question. 🤣Let me go ask myself, and I’ll get back to you. 🤔

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