1950’s Carnival Poster from 1950’s Unlimited

Skeletons will never learn to stride.

No, there’s simply no bicycle

awaiting us on the other side.

Death is not a race,

it’s a pendulum ride.

The inevitable weightless joy

of lifting from the ground.

Centripetal force reminds

us that every cycle’s round.

Our accomplishments minuscule

from a rocket in the sky.

A vessel filled with spirits

freed from space and time.

When we’ve lingered long enough

in life’s weary line,

God’s arm extends

to take us on

a final, gleeful glide.

©2023 | K. Hartless


GloPoWriMo#30: Today, I’d like to challenge you to write a palinode – a poem in which you retract a view or sentiment expressed in an earlier poem. Here is my earlier work: The Final Breakaway

8 responses to “Death is a Pendulum Ride”

  1. So good. ❤️☺️

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    1. Thank you, John. I didn’t quite find the perfect postcard for this one, but it was fun to get carried away with this idea. 💜

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      1. Yes, you did find the right card. ☺️

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      2. 😊

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  2. […] and retract not only my previous poem, but tonight’s poem as well. Tonight’s musings: Death is a Pendulum Ride and my earlier work: The Final […]

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  3. I love the zip and zest of that final resurrection: strap your self in 🙂 🙂 🙂

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  4. Great visuals and rhythm here.

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    1. Thank you. Those rides look scarier than they are and it seemed perfect for this idea.

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